It contains a small typo, but the information given is also incorrect.
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It mentioned that the problem is 99% on intel cards but this is simply not true, it's almost always because they are using 32 bit java on a 64 bit OS.
It is also highly unprofessional. Either change that to reflect all graphics vendors, or remove it.
Also, include the mention of 64bit Java incase 32bit was detected.