Combining #2082 and #1833 here:
Typo in the beginning {F356} {F359} {F365} {F367}
at the start it talks about a green light ... that is a red one {F355} {F361}
Issue: When entering the ship for the first time, the tutorial refers to the old HUD's locations on the screen. This needs to be updated. {F363} description incorrect with new GUI
Shields in amber on the left screen side
Hitpoint system got added - Structure and armor HP bars to the left
Power (blue) and speed (green) on the right side
Issue: The Controller System is introduced by NPC-02 immediately after he explains he is going to show how weapons works. It makes sense to the developer, but to the user, it seems like NPC-02 totally forgot what he was saying. I would try to reword this.
Thats still a bit unclear and a player may get confused.
Issue: After placing 6 cannon modules (he calls them barrels, he should be calling them modules), maybe name them "cannon barrel modules" to make clear Controller -> Module and name of this module is Cannon barrel.
Crafting:
"craft generics" Button - > "Craft generic resources" Button ? or is the Refine Raw Material the target
you have to guess what it expects you to do (placing ores in Refine Raw Material slot )
pressing either button does not continue the tutorial
after placing Basic Factory
" Press the Production button.." - > its the "Change Production" Button
Issue: at one point NPC-02 reference to a gravity module to use in case of a problem. first .. there is no need to the room is small enough to jump anywhere ... and there is no Gravity module around anyway.